Some Inappropriate Things

Read Some Inappropriate things  – 1 here

That week, a movie had been the reason for his visit. He visited again the next week, this time because he had to buy some new clothes for himself. During a few earlier visits too, she had helped him pick his clothes. It had become their ‘thing’ now. If he wanted to buy new clothes, she would accompany him and help him pick. It went like this,

“Hey! I need to buy a new jacket.”

“Okay. When can you make it?”

“Next Saturday?”


This was followed by his visit the very next week to enquire something about his exams at the University. So, they met again. His visits were becoming more and more frequent, she noticed.

That day, they had their lunch in a mall and were on their way to the parking lot. They got into a packed elevator. He went in first and stood right behind her. As the elevator closed and began its descent, she could hear him breathe. Hard, fast and loud as though every moment in that elevator was a torture for him. She wondered what was going on in his mind. The next time the elevator opened, she motioned him to follow her.

“What was happening in there?”, she asked him.


“You. You were hyperventilating. What was that? I could hear you breathe so loud. I bet everyone in there could.”

She was leading him down the stairway. He hesitated before he answered.

“I – I – You were right in front of me, so close, the scent of you, your hair, it was difficult.”he said, refusing to make eye contact. Somehow, it didn’t come off as a surprise to her.

“I don’t think we should keep meeting so often”, was her reply.

“Why not?”

“It just doesn’t feel right”

She noticed that the staircase was empty and something made her increase her pace down the stairs.

“What is wrong in meeting once in a while?”

She increased her pace further.

“And why are you running? It is as though you fear me!”, he added

She ignored him.

“So where are you going next?” she asked.

“Home. Mom wants to visit my uncle and I should be there by 4 PM to take her there.”

She slowed down as they approached the last floor of the building. 

“Ahh! It is already 3.40pm and you have around 35 Kms to your home. I hope people don’t discover that you are ‘The Superman.’”

He smiled. She liked his smile when he enjoyed her witticisms and before she could even bask in the glory of her successful jest, he caught her unguarded and pushed her lightly against the wall of the staircase and planted a kiss on her cheek. As her initial shock wore off, he relaxed his grip on her and she punched him hard. A couple more punches and she ran out into the parking spot, amidst people.

It was all over in a flash and her heart was pounding loud and hard. She feared he could hear the thumping. Or even worse, she feared her heart would just smash through her ribs and fall off. She wondered if she should punch him again, there, in front of all those people. Maybe it wasn’t a good idea. She glared at him furiously as he walked towards her rubbing his arm where she had punched him. He had that ugly smirk on his face.

“Stop smiling! Else, I’ll punch you again!” she said. He tried but just couldn’t stop smiling. If anything, his smile just grew wider. He had always wanted this. So many times had he imagined holding her and kissing her like that and more. But no imagination came even close to how it actually felt kissing her. It was difficult for him not to smile.

Some Inappropriate Things - A Kiss
Some Inappropriate Things

“Totally worth it! If you had slapped me, even that would have been worth it.” he said, that smirk of sweet victory dancing on his face, yet again. She wanted to wipe that off his face with another punch, right there and break that little proud nose but thought better of it.

I will be the wine that you’ll never taste. She had told him once.

“You will so regret this.” saying so, she stormed out.

I won’t talk to him ever again. Not if he apologizes, not if he begs. That should teach him a lesson. That would teach him not to meddle with his friends like that.

She had made up her mind. She wanted to make him regret his folly. She wanted to make him understand how wrong he was.

The human mind is like the Universe. Vast, unexplored beyond a certain extent, full of possibilities and surprises. We think we have figured things out when a new theory would emerge contradicting the existing ones. We think we know ourselves very well. But there comes a point in our lives when we would end up surprising ourselves.

Something fluttered inside her stomach as she was on her way back. Her heart was still pounding. It is amazing how we almost never notice its presence. But during moments like these, the heart is like a caged, wild animal. She couldn’t get that moment out of her head. The deftness with which he pushed her against the wall and the gentleness with which he kissed her. How could one be so strong and yet so gentle at the same time?

No! I shouldn’t be thinking of it. It was wrong. I should be angry with him. I am. And I would make sure he regrets it.

Yet, her thoughts wandered to him, to that staircase. That wall behind her, his fingers holding her, those soft lips against her cheek, the initial jolt, the moment of the realization, the struggle…

The first thing she did once she reached home was to enquire if he had reached safely. “It felt good meeting you again.” she typed.

No! I was supposed to be angry. Dammit! I am angry!

“Except the last part. I am still angry.” She added and hit the send button. That should do it for now. She closed her eyes, remembered that kiss and smiled to herself.

Why on Earth did some inappropriate things feel so so so good?

To be or not to be continued…

Image courtesy –  Deviant Art

21 thoughts on “Some Inappropriate Things

  1. Definitely ‘to be continued…’ 😀 You write stories so well Ranjini. I read a lot less of story and poetry, and yet I bump into some great bloggers like you, who are smacking the art of writing moments so beautifully. Keep up with this, I will often visit to read more. Much love to you 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much. This was something I tried one fine day and so I am not sure if I can take it forward in the same rhythm.
      Your encouragement makes me want to continue. Will definitely try. 😀

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  2. Hmm, nice pace as the tension escalates. She seems undecided about whether to be flattered or insulted. Hope he (and many like him) don’t take encouragement from her un-surety to press more physical challenges upon her.

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    1. There is a thin line right? To know if one has to be offended or flattered? Plus it depends upon the other person too. What if he takes advantage of her?


      1. That’s what I meant. He may exploit her indecision and cross over into physical abuse. She shouldn’t say No if she means a Maybe. Or atleast, decide for herself what she intends to say. The dillydallying leads many men to believe No = Yes. Anyways, it makes for an interesting tale of ifs and buts, and leaves a wide space for a part II. When is it due?

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      2. Very veryyy true. I know quite a lot of women who are unsure about things at first & soon their Nos turn to Yes. I think this is where guys get the idea that a woman’s ‘No’ may also mean ‘Yes’.

        This is Part 2. I had written one before this. As for the next part, I don’t know. This is something I write when inspiration strikes. 🙂


  3. Nice going, Ranjini. This can easily demand a sequel… 🙂

    Women often fail to understand what they really want and that’s the root of all evil. If a woman wants a kiss or even sex, there’s nothing wrong in it because we never criticize a man who expresses the same desire…

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    1. Absolutely. Even though the change is happening gradually, people still judge a woman who is confident about her sexuality and voices her needs. No matter how many speeches or status updates people make, when it comes to reality, even if it is for a fleeting moment, people judge.

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  4. When’s the sequel coming? 😝 You and stairs are a pair! Your narrative is great and keeps a person like me engaged to read/feel till the end because I don’t like to read/watch most of the romantic related stuff but this different 😉


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