They laughed, waved,
smiled and toiled.
They danced in the breeze
and reflected her turmoils.
They were stared at, they were touched,
some gazed at them, awed.
For the beauty was rare,
of such tresses long, strong and thawed.
Anger pulled at her hair,
With his arms brawny, he hauled.
He curled them around his fist,
and hit her against the wall.
Envy leered and sneered,
and held gently her tresses.
With a smile of deceit, bit by bit,
he snipped them as he caressed.
With the passing years,
her head ached with the burden.
Of illness, pains and aches,
and her tresses adding to them.
Envy, Anger and sickness,
Never sullied those beautiful thick hair.
They grew every time,
quick and with a newly found vigor.
Until he came along,
Uninvited and never to leave.
Not a strand did they find later,
Envy, Anger and the pain peeve.
For the tresses fell & never grew,
as long as the guest remained.
And to shun him, they had begun
radiations that had her hair drained.
Inspired by the life of someone I know. She had long, straight, beautiful hair that grew so quickly every time it was trimmed. She was subjected to a lot of domestic violence and her hair was what her husband used to torture her. People used to be very envious of her hair and force her to cut them off when they got a chance. As if this wasn’t enough, she was diagnosed with cancer. By the grace of god, she is well now.
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Beautiful and heart-wrenchingly sad. I knew one such girl and it still hurt me to think about the loss of her… May God help them all.
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Yes Ada… Too many people around. 😦
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fist bump. very well-put, comrade
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Fist bump 😀 Humbled 🙂
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poignant .. i never thought it would end like this when i started reading ! Liked it so much that tried to re-follow your blog lest it slip from my already hazy memory 🙂
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Thank you 🙂 For both liking the post and trying to refollow. 🙂 I don’t know how you’d feel when you get to know that I know people like this. I don’t own the credits.
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It makes it sadder … i knew about hair loss in chemo … but never gave a thought what it must be doing to the patients…:(
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Wow….poignant! beautifully written.
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Thank you 🙂
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Very Nice, thoughtful stuff you have written! Somewhere in heart it is sad to know this about cancer patients 😦
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Thank you Paayal. It is sad indeed.
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Agreed 🙂
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very touching poem. you write awesome.
I got tears in my eyes remembering my mom-in-law who lost almost all her hair due to cancer. She always kept her pallu on her head.
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Thank you. I’m humbled.
I’m sorry about your mother in law.
The number of people who get affected by this is alarming.
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Beautiful thought of donating hair to cancer patients. My father is oncologist. I know how depressing it is! Felt your lines deeply….
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Thank you Ravish. I know how it must be.
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Its so beautifully written, kudos, Thank you for sharing this. May God be with all those who are going through life with cancer.
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Thank you 🙂
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Wow I had to reread it after I read your explanation at the end… very well written for such a difficult time.
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Thank you 🙂 For your time.
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